A Book’s Journey

As my Facebook friends may have seen from my post there, I finished the rough draft of the third in my trilogy on August 25th. But the rough draft isn’t anything you want to show anybody yet. It just means you got to the place where you wrote “THE END.” And that is a milestone for sure.

I was in Portland at the time, with my kids who live there, and we took an afternoon a couple of days after I completed the rough–a celebration for me–to visit the exquisite Japanese Gardens in Portland. It’s a place of such beauty, such peace and tranquility, we all absorbed the wonder of it, the delicate placement of every tree and shrub, the whisper of rushing water from the many streams, the artistic shrines that speak to you at a level below conscious thought.

Better for me perhaps that the culture behind this beauty was far from the cultures portrayed in my story, so I could set that aside for the day.

But of course I still had work to do on that book. The next stage after the rough draft might be called the “first read.” Every book I write will be full of typos from racing through to get it down as quickly as possible. For me a fast writing is important. When I teach writing I encourage students to choose the method that is quickest for them. Are they fast on the keyboard? Do that. Faster by hand? Do that. I’m a fast typist. But whether typing on a keyboard or writing by hand there’s no way you can get it down as fast as you might speak it, or as the characters might say the words in their dialogue. I write from a comprehensive outline so a lot of it is there for me. But since I went to laptop keyboards–though I love my laptop–I’m not as accurate as I once was. Spell check will only get some of them.

But there’s more. The work has become a living, breathing thing, and ideas don’t stop coming. A new scene here. A new phrase there. So all of that has to be inserted into the manuscript in a way that it still flows.

Now I’m happy to say I completed the first read yesterday. It’s ready to show to my wonderful beta readers. They’ll all have something that needs fixed or improved somehow. They’ll see more typos I missed on my reading. And ideas will still come. For now it’s quiet. I’m feeling it.

My thoughts go back to the peace and tranquility of Portland’s Japanese Gardens. The koi, like these two, offer reflection in their peaceful pond. I am at peace. Tranquil. My heart is full of the new story and the characters who walk through it.

New Manuscript Ready for Reader

Here’s my newest creative effort, all tidied up for my beta reader Carol Beckley. I’ll print out more for my other readers, Judy Emmett and my daughter Carisa Cegavske.

After completing the rough draft in record time, I stepped away from it for a few days, then read it myself to smooth it out a little and correct the typos. Odd things appear sometimes when my fingers move fast. I always go through it twice at this point–once on the computer, once on paper. I still see a lot on paper that I pass right over onscreen.

It will need many more reads and fine tuning, but getting it ready for readers is another landmark in the process.

As noted in my last post, this is the third in my trilogy centered in ancient Ireland. The working title is Pushing the Tide. This trilogy is an offshoot of my trilogy set in Minoan Crete. Altogether these epic historicals cover a 100-year period from 1470 B.C. to 1370 B.C., following families who face profound challenges affecting their world. The stories are filled with adventure and romance–sailing and swashbuckling, thundering horses, moments of laughter and tears and of intimacy.

Just as I was finishing this one another story in the series began to grow in my mind. So the epic continues.

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Another Book Abloom

I just finished the rough draft of a new novel, a historical to conclude my trilogy set in ancient Ireland. Spring always puts me in mind of things coming to life, so it seems fitting that this book has come to life for me now as my daffodils bloom.

It seems doubly fitting, given the fertile nature of the island of Ireland–or Éire, as I call it in the book.

My friend Tilly Engholm and I visited Ireland a few years ago when I was researching the first in the trilogy. We spent the month of May there, a glorious time. Scenes I came to know then reappear in this new book–and the stones.

The stone circles of the island hold a special place for the clanspeople in my stories, and I needed to visit many circles on our visit. As Tilly and I headed out one day in our rental car, she glanced at me. “We’re going to look at more rocks, aren’t we?”

I laughed. “Yes, we are.”

She took it in good stride, though.

In this book the characters also travel to Iberia, now Portugal, and to Crete and Thera (Santorini), with other stops along the Mediterranean, places of beauty and wonder and peril.

It has been a great ride and I look forward to sharing it with readers.

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